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The Last Day of October--Prologue Pic 47

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mmpratt99
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Medium-- pencil and acrylic 
Picture Size (border included)--10 1/2 X12 1/2"


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The Last Day of October illustration and  characters (C) Copyrighted to mmpratt99 12-15-014
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3601x4339px 2 MB
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This piece is thoughtful and dark, but is it supposed to be? The lines are most definitely to prominent for the realistic style that is displayed. Also, the proportion is a little out of whack- but, there are plenty of tutorials out there to help you. Try adding some colour, no matter how subtle it may be- it will definitely brighten it up and produce some more interest. The story is confusing as there are not words, but that is easily fixed. I love the expression on the bottom section though, and with my tips above, it could become wonderful!! Keep trying!